Haiku

Haiku

A Poem by Bryan
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My first haiku... Decided to give it a try!

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Rainbow attitude
Concrete thoughts, so sure of you
Personality

© 2013 Bryan


Author's Note

Bryan
Not sure if it makes any sense... Any thoughts?

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Makes sense to me! Personality is composed of thoughts and attitude, is it not? And isn't it a mixture of rainbow and concrete? Of course it is!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Interesting...it has a really nice sound:) I've found traditional Haikus to have very strict criteria, but this is a strong poem in its own right. It expresses very deep connotations through the precise words and rhythm, and leaves a lot of room for interpretation.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on January 14, 2013
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Bryan
Bryan

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I am 15, I love to write. Not much happens in my life... yet somehow I find something to write about. I have very little experience, and I don't have as much time as I would like! But i try to writ.. more..

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