Myself

Myself

A Poem by Bryan
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A reflection on myself...

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Who is me?
Who is this character?
I act like many 
Yet I am one
I do not know
Which is real
One or the other
The contrast is unclear
I do not know myself
No one knows me
Who am I?
What am I?

© 2013 Bryan


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hey boy,sounds really cool.also,bob dylan is truly best.

keep going

Posted 5 Years Ago


This was really good! It brought into my mind the image of standing in the center of a room and all around are versions of the self, going about their different day to day activities. In the center, the true person keeps looking around, wondering if any of them are the real he, or if he is the real one, of perhaps none, or all.

Awesome ink!
Aaron

Posted 6 Years Ago


Honestly. I don't write poetry like this. Totally unchartered territory here.

Self reflective pieces are always the best, however.

I act like many
Yet I am one

Something we all go through, bit having it writtn just brings a whole new truth to it.
I liked this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


this gave me the chills because it was so well written! it was short and sweet but in a good way because each word you could tell held so much information

Posted 6 Years Ago


I tend to think we paint who we are differently every day that we are alive. Since we are always growing and evolving, changing and adapting, it would make sense that the best answer to this poems question is... you are you.... just as I am I... We simply are who we are in the now. =)
Nice poem!

Kate

Posted 6 Years Ago


But i liked it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


The first line would have been better if it said "Who am I?" instead of "Who is me?"

Posted 6 Years Ago


To repeat a previous comment, beautiful and oh so relatable. I actually like the starkness. It's a verry confronting question.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is really lovely, quite relatable actually.
Maybe you could add more depth and detail.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bryan

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the feedback. I may make another version with more detail, that was just a quick draft i .. read more

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I am 15, I love to write. Not much happens in my life... yet somehow I find something to write about. I have very little experience, and I don't have as much time as I would like! But i try to writ.. more..

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