A Poem by Bryan

A quick writing...


Why must we be afraid?

What lies within us is not real

Yet it is the truth

A creature lies within

Eating our conscience

From the depths of our mind

Warping our reality

Into darkness

From a meadow of endless possibility

To an alley of closed minded negative thoughts

Where the monster within

Has just murdered

Another of its many victims

© 2013 Bryan

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Good one. I like the mysterious side of your writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago

I found you via your forum post. You've got talent! I love how you immediately jump from "what lies within us is not real" to "it is the truth." Way to mess with perception and confusion and identity. Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on January 16, 2013
Last Updated on January 16, 2013
Tags: Frightening, Poem



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