Used to it..

I never really thought i knew myself..

The old mixed in well with the new..

Still, it’s just misery..

It’s the loss of thought at every turn..

It’s the conflicting g-d complex that i’ve always felt..

But i’ll get used to it..

I’m reeling at every part..

I’m feeling weaker and weaker..

Still, it’s just pain..

It’s the feeling of nausea every morning..

It’s the pain in the loss of everyone..

But i got used to it...

Author's Note

Honest opinions please

Reviews

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Honest and straight to the point. Depressing yes, but creative...absolutely. I like this a lot. Thanks for sharing and keep ip the good work!

[Dayran]

It takes a lot to hold on. Its like we see cruelty everywhere we turn. But coming out of our teens a man has to understand better his G-D experience. Its a compliment to the teen's love of life and enthusiasm for activity ... it doesn't have to seek only the good. Go do a little graffiti on a wall somewhere. A little vandalism each day keeps the doctor away. But don't forget to pray that you won't get caught.

[stars are far]

welll.... it's kindda depressing ...but great work..
I want to give you this advice ,i hope i can make your life better but I will try..
Well please read it , you need nothing to be happy,just smile ,well think about anythig that you get depressed and sad about !! Think once,twice,trice ..and keep thinking ..anything that make you sad ..like what ?? you didnt get what you want !! Dont get sad,because if it was yours from the begging its yours at the end ,if not ..then move on...nothing that you lose is better than what you get... because loosing something isn't bad indeed..It shows how much you are strong and patient ... And what else ? People? NO friends ? Im here ;) and trust me people are not everything ,,,you can live alone ..but be so happy which makes people attract to you :)..
And be sure ..always keep in your mind...Life is not a frown..you make the smile..so just SMILE :) ..laugh ..live...
Sorry I took from your time..but i like to make people feel happy..cause i know that sadness tastes bitter :( and happiness taste chococlate :D
Hope you understand me :)))) And You live a great life

[Tainted Devotion]

Short and to the point. A very depressing piece. But good none-the-less.