Blue Eyed Demon

Blue Eyed Demon

A Poem by Serena Kaye
"

Those blue eyes stabbed my heart..

"
Twist and turns,
Burns and scars,
Memories fade,
Just a little bit more,
Day by day,
Wish to kiss,
From giving a f**k,
To giving up,
Just another torture,
Threat after threat,
I lost my damn mind,
I'm so high on memorizing pain,
This is demon stone,
The stone of ones heart,
Darkened from the stone cold demon,
Heart gone black,
Eyes red as roses,
Memorizing the look,
Back to sanity,
Heart pumping,
Blue eyes,
Seeking into another soul,
Blue eyed demon

© 2012 Serena Kaye


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each line is like a powerful statement and they each roll nicely. more great work!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Heh, thanks.
Is the Blue eyed demon hypnotizing because i had to read it over again just because i loved it so much. Intriguing, Entrancing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thank you! Hah, I've read it a lot too.
you are a deep strong writer. Very well written you have such a way with words.As young as you are you have so much time to grow in your writing.You will continue to get better. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

I guess 15 is young xD
Sorta, not in my eyes though,
But thank you!
Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

you very welcome,your writing is at times dark,raw, no holding back I totally respect that.
Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Yeah, it can be.
Just all depends. Heh
Falling head over heels over the blue eyes of an atrocity we'd be better off not knowing; enjoyable, if not astounding, concept you have here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

I'm a bit confused on "Falling head over heels over the blue eyes of an atrocity we'd be better off .. read more
Tai Ryens

7 Years Ago

In other words, loving a devil.
Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thought so,
I'm sick, My mind is outta it..>.
I love how you use the image of a high when it's really a bad trip...and to "memorize" the pain...your sense of irony is uncanny...powerful stuff here...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Heh, thanks..
kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

No prob^^
powerful write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
powerful stuff again..You are SO intense...I am crap at reading into poetry. I feel the hurting and the frustration...From my POV...Great...I love the 'high on memorising pain...And the total darkness...almost oblivion of it all...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

No need to thank me, I enjoy getting your reviews,
They acutely help some.
Dr. Wood ?

7 Years Ago

well now I feel great..and you have actually helped ME some
Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Awe, yay. That's good, helping one another. ^_^

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Added on August 26, 2012
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