Blue Eyed Demon

Those blue eyes stabbed my heart..

Twist and turns,
Burns and scars,
Memories fade,
Just a little bit more,
Day by day,
Wish to kiss,
From giving a f**k,
To giving up,
Just another torture,
Threat after threat,
I lost my damn mind,
I'm so high on memorizing pain,
This is demon stone,
The stone of ones heart,
Darkened from the stone cold demon,
Heart gone black,
Eyes red as roses,
Memorizing the look,
Back to sanity,
Heart pumping,
Blue eyes,
Seeking into another soul,

Blue eyed demon

Reviews

[TheJordBaker]

each line is like a powerful statement and they each roll nicely. more great work!!

[Serena Kaye]

Heh, thanks.

[Rhea752]

Is the Blue eyed demon hypnotizing because i had to read it over again just because i loved it so much. Intriguing, Entrancing.

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you! Hah, I've read it a lot too.

[Rob Santana]

you are a deep strong writer. Very well written you have such a way with words.As young as you are you have so much time to grow in your writing.You will continue to get better. :)

[Serena Kaye]

I guess 15 is young xD
Sorta, not in my eyes though,
But thank you!

[Rob Santana]

you very welcome,your writing is at times dark,raw, no holding back I totally respect that.

[Serena Kaye]

Yeah, it can be.
Just all depends. Heh

[Tai Ryens]

Falling head over heels over the blue eyes of an atrocity we'd be better off not knowing; enjoyable, if not astounding, concept you have here.

[Serena Kaye]

I'm a bit confused on "Falling head over heels over the blue eyes of an atrocity we'd be better off not knowing"
Other than that, thanks.

[Tai Ryens]

In other words, loving a devil.

[Serena Kaye]

Thought so,
I'm sick, My mind is outta it..>.

[kublakhan27]

I love how you use the image of a high when it's really a bad trip...and to "memorize" the pain...your sense of irony is uncanny...powerful stuff here...

[Serena Kaye]

Heh, thanks..

[kublakhan27]

No prob^^

[afra]

powerful write

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you.

[Dr. Wood ?]

powerful stuff again..You are SO intense...I am crap at reading into poetry. I feel the hurting and the frustration...From my POV...Great...I love the 'high on memorising pain...And the total darkness...almost oblivion of it all...

[Serena Kaye]

Well thank you.
I am intense at times.

[Dr. Wood ?]

It shows in your writing, but as I said.. I am really no good at reviewing poetry, I merely do my best.

[Serena Kaye]

I think you're quite fine at it.

[Dr. Wood ?]

why thank you so much.....I appreciate that...

[Serena Kaye]

No need to thank me, I enjoy getting your reviews,
They acutely help some.

[Dr. Wood ?]

well now I feel great..and you have actually helped ME some

[Serena Kaye]

Awe, yay. That's good, helping one another. ^_^