Bitter High

Bitter High

A Poem by Serena Kaye
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High on pain..

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Meandering on a high,

Skating on a mountain,

Twisting in the sheets,

Lost in thought,

Looking for a path,

What curves I have,

Finding a way,

Wobbling as I tremble down,

Backing up time to time,

Not sure if this is how it goes,

Is this the time?

Forget get everything,

Vanish into the high,

What a dark sky this is,

Jumping from cloud to cloud,

It’s a storm warning,

Here is the path,

Dark, gray, and musky,

This is the way,

When will it clear?

Sun shinning,

Seeing as if it’s cleared up,

Cheer up a bit,

It’s just a dream you see,

Back to the dark,

What a bitter chill,

Oh what a high this is,

© 2012 Serena Kaye


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Amazing girl!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thanks.
This was full of images and they seemed to speak to me. I want to be there, it was like watching a blurry tv screen. It made you want to experience it even if it was full of misery. VERY well done!!


Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Heh, thank you so much.
what a great write suicide, you have a way with words. Kepp writing my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
Indeed, misery is almost enjoyable~
I know this by heart~

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thanks.
This had a smokey mountain feel to it, like a group of old men with their ole guitars, singin.


Nice

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Heh thanks.
I don't know how to put it...this poem speaks to me, tonight it's screaming at me...awesome job^^

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
very deep write ....i like it ...good work my friend

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Heh, thank you. I try.
you manage to make misery seem almost enjoyable in this,,very cleverly...Bet this didn't take long to write, it feels as if it just flowed

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

No it didn't take long.
Heh, yeah it does :p
Thanks

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Added on August 26, 2012
Last Updated on August 26, 2012
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