Coffin Waiting

Rise of 10,

Every forenoon,

Dodging around the ones that love the,

Pondering them with worries,

Tragedy within ones eyes,

Masked around as if everyday is a darkened masquerade ball,

Twirling around ones thoughts of demise,

Abandoning ones passion,

Seeking for that compassion of another ones masked figure,

Grave bound heart,

Drunken slurs from forbidden secrets,

Wine red lips of lies,

Stone cold eyes that are sharp as daggers,

Veins filled with acid of abhor,

Dust filled lungs,

Breathing out pathetic air,

Decaying second after second,

The coffin just waits,

Author's Note

Err, haven't written anything in about three moths.
So if this one seems a little like shit, whoops.
It just flowed out randomly so I went with it.

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Killer creative. I have one that I thought was kinda f****n odd. But it turned out to be one of my favourites. When you have time check it out. Its called SPIRITUAL AUTOPSY.

[kublakhan27]

No "whoops" necessary here...actually I wish I wrote this :P

[Tai Ryens]

You say this is s**t, I declare this a masterpiece. Glints into your past foreshadow pending doom, and a momentous passion for masked figures symbolize the attempt at escape you must so often endure.. Allowing the true one to worry by constantly avoiding, I admire the emotions portrayed . . . Flawless.

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think you did ok...you simply have to go with the flow....If you have a block the trick is not to sit down and TRY to write it is to sit down and WRITE...Just write down random words without thought...This poem came out well, the gruesome subject matter is immaterial..jusy write what you're thinking

[khalid]

it is very nicely penned really although the topic is such a scaring issue..death is the fact which we are all sure of its existence but at the same time we all forget that it is..nobody has ever been back from there to describe what that world looks like, we get all our information about this world through some writings like yours here..