Unxplainable Mysteries Story 4

Aren't you afraid of the unkown?

What if you can see into the future, would you change it? What if the future holded something so terrifying that made your skin crawl. We may never know what the future may hold for any of us. But there are myths and legends that say they can tell the future. Wiji ?

Brenda loves to go online and chat with her friends, everything, it's her own little obsession. But one night, looking for an email her friend had send her, but there was another email, the person who had send this email, didn’t even have a name is just said unknown. Of course she wanted to find out what this was. When she opened the email, it said click here to watch, she pressed it. And there she saw a clip of her mom's red car, driving in the middle of the night. And there in the middle of the road was a car stuck or out of gasoline in the middle of the road. And then bang, mom's car crashed into the other car

My hear felt empty when I had watched the clip. I ran to the kitchen screaming were mom was, my brother came out and asked she went out with dad. He asked why. But I didn’t get to answer I ran to the phone, and called mom on the phone, she answered and asked what was wrong. I asked were they were, she said there were on the high-way, that when it hit me and I screamed Mom looked out for that car, I herd her car stopped, and said she call me back.

I couldn’t sleep all night until I herd the front door open, I went running to the door, and asked my mom if she was alright, she said she was fine, and then she asked me how did I know there was car that needed help. I said I had a feeling. Then I asked what happen. She said well when you called we were in the middle of helping out a man. And then the car started going away by itself, so that's when I told you to call me back. And we just helped the man and that's all. My heart felt relieved when I herd, I guess it was just a prank. As I raced to my room. The T.V was on

So dear what a night, yes honey, well at least are daughter cares for us. yes.

Hey look there was an accident in the same highway we were at a couple of minutes ago. Wow that looks like our car, wow we must be lucky that wasn’t us

upstairs in Brenda’s room

Before I went to sleep of course I checked my mail and yet again I got another email, by unknown. I laughed and said what joke are they sending me today, I opened it and I saw space shuttles and some sort of attack going on I guess some sort of alien invasion, I laughed and turned my computer off and said, gosh what a joke.

Reviews

[Pink Poison]

I like this story, in general. In the second paragraph, you change from being Brenda's friend to being her. There is no sense of transistion.
Other than that, I noticed a few misspelled words; "heard" not "herd" and "Ouiji" not "wiji" Other than those glitches I think this is a great story. You should keep writing...I wish I could write horror, but I am always veering off into funny. Sheesh.