What's wrong with me?

What's wrong with me?

Why am I different?

What did I do to deserve this?

Was it really all,

My,

Fault?

 

I'm a check uncashed,

A life unlived.

An empty shell,

The present never gived.

 

Am I left behind?

Like a hot Pop-Tart?

Dropped on a

Cold,

Kitchen,

Floor.

Reviews

[free ronnie radke!]

mmm pop tart...you can be my pop tart sho sho

[Ben]

Very good. Gived should be given though, and I don't think uncashed is a word either. I like how you have
Was it really all,
My,
Fault?

and,
Dropped on a
Cold,
Kitchen,
Floor.

Good work, keep it up!