Keep Quiet

Keep Quiet

A Poem by UpComesDown

Hello again.
Did you miss me?
Of course you did.
You know I'm always here.
I won't go away.
It's not my fault.
It's you that won't share me.
You keep me locked here,
In this prison.
Well here I am.
I will fight to be free.
With every fiber of my being,
I will break you down.
You will slowly collapse from the inside.
I want the world to know of my existence.
I want them to see me,
And I want them to see you!
Don't you understand?
The more you hide me,
The more I will burden you.
That's what you get for trying to keep a Secret.

© 2011 UpComesDown


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secrets are kept secret for a reason...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Strong emotional piece I really liked this The structure is great and reading this at two different paces this is great both times so very well done I will be viewing more of your work keep them coming

Posted 8 Years Ago



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