BIRD LIKE TO BE CAGED

BIRD LIKE TO BE CAGED

A Poem by Utkarsh Singh

" BIRD LIKE TO BE CAGED "


All are fool
To fly in the sky 
Risk their life 
To feed on worms 

Live in cage 
Where no one attacks you 
Without  struggle 
Satisfy your belly .

~UTKARSH SINGH

© 2014 Utkarsh Singh


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Interesting opinion. Just remember that "there" refers to a place, and "their" means belonging to them. I also think that birds value freedom more than you might think... Like, if you lived in prison you wouldn't have to support yourself anymore. People would give you food, but it wouldn't be nice for you... But I am basing my rating on your writing quality (according to me) and not your opinions. I think the poem is good. Interesting that you only used a full stop in one place, at the end, and that's the only punctuation marks you chose to use.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

thank you very much Encantado for correcting me b/t there their......
Glass Heart Inc

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. I see you have fixed it.
Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

ya once again thank you for correcting me ......



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Very interesting poem! Well written:) I enjoyed the read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

thanks mary.....:D
Mary Ochoa

9 Years Ago

You're welcome! :)
Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

...........:D
Interesting thought there. I want to be like the bird that flies through the sky and goes places rather than the bird that stays caged and has great meals. Freedom is everything to everyone and anything--even a bird! Nice poem anyway.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

thanks william .......i was waiting for ur review....... .finally i got it ...........:D
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I think your opinion is interesting, but I don't necessarily agree with you! :D It's a nice poem though :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

thanx for ur review pi
Nice but somehow we all want freedom and why be caged just cuz your scared? Life is about risks so be it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

i think u r right ....(y)
Nena

9 Years Ago

:) keep writing!
Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

ya sure ...... :D
Interesting take on the freedom of a bird. I like it. Short and sweet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

thank you black bird
Interesting - seldom do we see the reversal of freedom as anthing good - small mercies in both, I suppose - until we realise we are all prisoners, in some way - well written x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

thank you poppy
I would stay in my cage if it was made of gold and everyday a plate of salmon steak is served by a handsome personal butler. Sadly, my home is only made of straws and my daily diet is cheap ramen from the stores, so I have no choice but to get out there and struggle for my salary. By the way, this is a very nice and thoughtful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

thank you LSG....
My soul shall not be chained..
My mind not blinded...
I shall take those unknown steps...
Either I will fly high or die trying

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

NT i know that every one in this world like to be unchained..............bt there are many who are a.. read more
New Theory

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
We would rather stay in a cage where it is safe than roam free where we might encounter conflict.Well penned my friend and wise words true :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

thnx vidya
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

You are welcome)
Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

ma pleasure....... :D
It may seem offensive but most of us in present times look for comfort rather than venturing out in wilderness. Thank for putting the reality! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

9 Years Ago

glad u like it ....n thanks for the review...

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Added on April 22, 2014
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agra, India



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