Still Your CRUSH

Still Your CRUSH

A Poem by Utkarsh Singh

" STILL YOUR CRUSH "

We grew up together 
Like those two tree
Which we had planted 
At the age of three

Teenagers we were 
When your heart fell for me 
But I was the idiot
To mock at thee

Always ignored them,
The signs of your love
Shown by you through a gift
The pair of dove 
 
I realized every thing 
When you both were together on that day 
Saw you with a boy 
Holding hands together at the bay

Things and  the time,
Have changed in a rush
As he is your boyfriend 
But I am still your crush

~uTkArSh SiNgH

© 2014 Utkarsh Singh


Author's Note

Utkarsh Singh
rainbow presentation (VIBGOYR)....... ;)

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Wow..amazingly beautiful.. :)
Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks for the review anahat
"Things and the time,
Have changed in a rush
As he is your boyfriend
But I am still your crush"

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks sami .....:D
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

:).........................
Absolutely beautiful. We seem to ignore the one who has been loving us all the while and when we truly understand their gestures and feelings, they are already gone. Great work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thank parimal for the stop and this sweet review
its really touching very good

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks yuki
So sad but amazing. I love it

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks addy .......:D
So sad to know that but your poem is nice.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thank you very much angle
actually the color of rainbow goes ROY GBIV
but still the writing piece is interesting and colorful


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

vaishnavi its VIBGOYR only ....if you remember that prism diagram .....
we read it from bottom.. read more
vaishnavi

6 Years Ago

ok i dont want to start a debate on the colors but btw
your welcome
That was so sad. Yet, Neatly done :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks nena .......... :)
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haha! wow, this is .... amazing! I absolutely love this poem, very fun and such a fast read! I love the message, although very sad, it is still very clear, and relatable.... great write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thnks bowers for the stop...and for the awesome review.......keep reading my poems n keep smiling .... read more
What a sweet little ballad! Yuno, sometimes we just need to express our pains as plainly and easily as they came to us and thats what you have done here. Marvellous. Reminds me of a Hindi verse I wrote. Keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

ok .but i want to read it ...... :)
Penny

6 Years Ago

I've just sent it :-)
Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

hm got it ..... (y)

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Added on May 22, 2014
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Tags: tree, heart, idiot, teenager, bay, crush

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Utkarsh Singh
Utkarsh Singh

agra, India



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