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Dream In My Dream

Dream In My Dream

A Poem by Utkarsh Singh

Dream In My Dream "


Every night I had a dream
A dream about you
It's not a dream of love
Or romance  with you
But , in which you are remorselessly slayed
By those four men appareled in black
 
I can remember your dark red eyes
Filled with tear and anguish
Pink nose and grinding teeth
As they are going to crunch each other
Your grim pale face
Justifying the dry cold blood

It's a panorama of midnight park 
you were on foot and I was in a car
walking alone , you asked me for a lift  
when I just ignored you and passed by 
HELP ME !  as you cried
still resonating in my head, since that night 

Who are you ? why you visit my dream ?
Are you some evil spirit or just an incubus ?
I never met you or ever seen you
Then why ? why you disturb my kip ?
I beg you, leave my soul and my mind
Please leave me alone

It's been a week
Since you last retreated my dream
But wait , what's this ?
Why this background is changing itself 
Oh ! no , it's the same dream 
it's a dream in my dream 

~uTkArSh SiNgH

© 2014 Utkarsh Singh


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When I read the first two lines I was all like "UUuuhhhh....O_O" but then I continued and I was going "OH!" XD I'm such a dork....

But, anyway, really interesting poem! I started getting in to it and was really intrigued O_O What inspired you to write something like this?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

congo .....:D
Puffle

6 Years Ago

.....? O_o
Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

earned first place in a Youth Writing contest for a Churches of God ..:P



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nice well done...it feels good reading ur poems

Posted 5 Years Ago


OMG, this poem was amazing and brilliantly well written.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


This was horrifying!

Loved the font you used also. It made it even creepier!

(Sorry for being SO late.)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks jessica ........interesting review .... (y)
Lol inception I'm sorry I like this but reminded me of inception I'm on a goofiness thing from reading request but this one was very creative well done !

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot dear........
sorry for the late reply
Loved this poem, the gothic feel of the write is pretty evident, with the imagery really complimenting the dream, of a dark gloomy road. Good job, you are improving at super speed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot NT /......."super speed"......liked that comment...............;)
New Theory

6 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
Yeah there are some dreams where you see faces of strangers maybe it mean something. Anyway enjoyed this one. Well done dear!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks INK ......:D
Freaked me out a bit at first, glad I kept reading though. Quite the philosophical poem here. Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

hahaha .....freaked never meant to do so .....btw thanks for review
very nice read.. the last para is amazing. however, the last line in the second last para kinda disturbed the flow, you may think differently. Just my opinion. loved your poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks for the feedback deepika......:D
I liked it! It was haunting but still beautiful. It flowed nicely

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks for the beautiful review Ashleigh
nice piece of writing and a very catchy title like it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Utkarsh Singh

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot vaish ........:D..........finally i got your review ....... ;)
vaishnavi

6 Years Ago

yes actually it doesn't means all the time that we read a poem or a piece of writing we should revie.. read more

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