Dream In My Dream

" Dream In My Dream "

Every night I had a dream

A dream about you

It's not a dream of love

Or romance  with you

But , in which you are remorselessly slayed

By those four men appareled in black

 

I can remember your dark red eyes

Filled with tear and anguish

Pink nose and grinding teeth

As they are going to crunch each other

Your grim pale face

Justifying the dry cold blood

It's a panorama of midnight park 

you were on foot and I was in a car

walking alone , you asked me for a lift  

when I just ignored you and passed by 

HELP ME !  as you cried

still resonating in my head, since that night 

Who are you ? why you visit my dream ?

Are you some evil spirit or just an incubus ?

I never met you or ever seen you

Then why ? why you disturb my kip ?

I beg you, leave my soul and my mind

Please leave me alone

It's been a week

Since you last retreated my dream

But wait , what's this ?

Why this background is changing itself 

Oh ! no , it's the same dream 

it's a dream in my dream 

~uTkArSh SiNgH

Reviews

[Puffle]

When I read the first two lines I was all like "UUuuhhhh....O_O" but then I continued and I was going "OH!" XD I'm such a dork....

But, anyway, really interesting poem! I started getting in to it and was really intrigued O_O What inspired you to write something like this?

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks CC .......what inspired me i think my nightmares .......i just convert them into a poem and add a character to it ........just as simple as that ..........:)

[Puffle]

Interesting O_O I take my random nightmares and throw them into a random plot, then never turn into much of anything, I have a huge box in my room full of random notes etc, I should really put more up here...O_o

[Utkarsh Singh]

its a matter of talent ...i can convert them into poems you convert them into notes .....better to take a plot then fix your nightmare into that and you will see birth of a small ,boring line .....
by the way i think that i should also note my nightmare somewhere........heheh ....:D

[Puffle]

I'm not much of a poem person, I tend to lean towards fiction writing. Although, somehow, I earned first place in a Youth Writing contest for a Churches of God thing O_o No clue how I managed that, but ANYWHO

[Utkarsh Singh]

congo .....:D

[Puffle]

.....? O_o

[Utkarsh Singh]

earned first place in a Youth Writing contest for a Churches of God ..:P

[Gurleen Saluja]

Well framed, quite imaginative.. A dream in my dream

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks gurleen ..... :D

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

.......... :)

[Saddam]

Who are you ? why you visit my dream ?
Are you some evil spirit or just an incubus ?
I never met you or ever seen you
Then why ? why you disturb my kip ?

Really that is evil soul, or you are a victim of any case? I don't know but surely she want to tell you anything about herself. Just jocking! Really you had a dream like that, but it might be a great mystery novel if you add some more characters and spread it.
Big shocking appearance. Great my friend. I enjoyed it.

[Utkarsh Singh]

no buddy not at all , i'm not a victim of any such case ......btw it's just my imagination and nothing more .......i'm happy that you liked it ....and about the novel i'll think over it .thaks for the review and for awesome idea

[Saddam]

I know that you are not. Maine bhi ek poetry likhi hai about ghost land. Soon I will post that. And yes think for a interesting and mysterious novel.

[Utkarsh Singh]

seems quite interesting........