Under your Spell

Under your Spell

A Poem by ;

This crazy feeling

This...sexual healing

The fire kindling


This love I'm feeling

This crazy urge

Soon our bodies will merge


I was waiting for it

The pain, the pleasure

Your fangs cutting through the leather

I try to hold myself together

But its too late

I'm all the way under

© 2008 ;

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Nice details of vampire's madness for the lust you've created there...

I just don't know what else to say there, I mean, it's very short and somehow, it feel like it's missing something else, unless I'm missing something here...

However, it's still good tho...

Posted 13 Years Ago

I'm gonna hope and pray that that's how my first time will be. lol ^^ That's how much I like this piece. :) Great job!

"The pain, the pleasure/Your fangs cutting through the leather" --My favorite part.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 13 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 7, 2008




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