FROM THE HEART

A poem about my amazing girlfriend. Pictures related to every paragraph included. Made it look really cool. It came straight from my heart, hope you guys like it. Please leave some reviews. thanks :)

Your words, your kisses your hugs, your touch,

  You make me so happy which makes this all worthwhile.

    These are some of the things i love so much,

      Your honesty, your loyalty, your beauty, your smile.

The things you say are just so sweet,

  Words can't explain the way you make me feel.

    It feels so nice when i hear your heartbeat,

      Your heart is the one, the one i had to steal.

I can't help but feel so loved by you,

  Me and you could never be more real.

    Losing each other is something we can't bare to go through,

      because our hearts will never be able to heal.

Everything we have been through in the past,

  We have still managed to stick together.

    The 16 months we have shared has gone by so fast,

      I hope we work out so we can last forever.

I love it when you sing me that song,

  It makes my heart seriously race.

    You and i could never be wrong,

      We own each others hearts, this we can never replace.

I love you so much i really do,

  This is why i struggle to be apart.

    I will never stop loving you,

      So please don't break my heart.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

you are amazing, this is my favourite poem you have written me. Its showing in your writing just how much you have inproved to. Your very first poems you wrote me where sweet and i thought they where good, had a few mistakes but your words touch my heart. But now those are nothing compared to this, you have improved more then you know.
I love this babe its so sweet and romantic and straight out from your heart. You touched me and your poetry really speaks to people not many poems do that. Your a better writer then you realize you have a talent you never really knew you had till you meet me and started writing for me.
I love your writing more so because its about me. I love you and your poems i am such a lucky girl to have you in my life.
What you did for me today was amazing no guy would ever do that for hes girlfriend if uyou wanted to be romantic you defiantly succeeded. Thank you you put the biggest smile on my face.
I love you keep writing mwa xxxooo

[mark]

awww thank you sweetheart i guess i have improved since back then. i'm very happy it touched you and put the biggest smile on your face. thats how i was hoping you would be i didn't expect you to be that excited about it but im glad it made you smile :)
i just wanted to do something sweet for you because i never really have much.
you're welcome babes i know i succeeded hehe...there will be plenty more surprises to come i promise :)
i love you too :) xxxooo

[Maria]

That was great and powerful, So much emotion and beauty at once. Great job

[NA]

Such a beautiful declaration of love...you did a wonderful job :) x

[mark]

thank you so much raven :)

[annabellee]

again a really lovely poem in which you poured your heart out. I loved it :)

[mark]

thank you so much anna :) glad u liked it :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)