SURPRISE!

A old poem i wrote to my girlfriend for when she wakes up :)

Sweetheart, i wanted you 

To wake up to this

I want to tell you 

What i really missed.

I missed your cuddles, your kisses, and your warm embrace.

I am now in your arms leaving hardly any space.

I wanted to be the first person

You see when you wake.

I thought this poem would

Be very cute to make.

I thought of you allot the whole way down here.

I just wanted to make that very crystal clear.

I couldn't wait to see 

Your gorgeous face today.

I don't want to leave you anymore,

I just want to hold you and stay.

I just really wanted to SURPRISE you hun.

Thank you so much for everything you have done.

I am now holding you

and will not let you go.

You're stuck with me forever,

I'm just letting you know.

You are so loyal and sweet to me, this and more is why i love you.

You still put up being with me, even after what we go through.

The last couple of weeks with you

Have been really great.

It's making us very happy,

Just like our first date.

I really enjoy holding you, keeping you very warm.

I can protect you from anything, even the biggest storm.

I'm sorry i'm protective

Of you sweetie.

I like you safe from these idiots

That's how i want you to be.

I hate you being out all alone, i worry because i love you.

I swear if i lost you, i don't know what i would do.

I'm ready to have a great day

With the girl i love so much.

And now i can give you a kiss,

With a sweet tender touch.

Reviews

[Blue]

"I'm sorry i'm protective
Of you sweetie.
I like you safe from these idiots
That's how i want you to be."

This is the kind of protectiveness and/or possessiveness that most girls want. Glad to know Cimmy has that. :)

A sweet poem from a sweet boyfriend to a sweet girlfriend. Invite us all in the wedding. Haha.

[mark]

awww thank you arzel :) yeah she's protected very much :)
and no wedding haha we don't need to get married to be committed :)
thanks for your review :)

[Laura Harrison]

Aww this is so sweet! You and Cimmy are a wonderful couple :)

[mark]

thanks very much :) yes we are hehe she's amazing :)

[Laura Harrison]

I love your relationship almost as much as I love mine haha :)

[mark]

haha wow u love our relationship that much lol??

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

HAHA! AWW Thats sweet :)

[mark]

lol that is sweet :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Another sweet amazing poem, by a sweet romantic cute man :)
im so glad i have such a sweet romantic man writing me poems.
I love every one of your poems hun and this is no exception :)
Great write :)

[mark]

thanks gorgeous :) xxxooo i love you :)

[Penny]

Ahem ahem.. writer couple, sorry to disturb you but you two are sooooooo cute. I wish i get someone with the same hobbies and talents like you two did. This was a terrific write with love oozing from it, cimmy you're a lucky girl and thanks for sharing you both. God bless you both.

[mark]

thank you :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

We actually dont have much in common haha. Im the writer, mark doesn't like writing much. To bad though, because hes a natural :) I know im extremely lucky :) Awww your sweet Penny :) God bless you to.
P.S: You will find someone i know you will, and when you do i hope hes worthy of you :)

[Penny]

My pleasure mark & Tenkew cimmy you always keep my hopes up.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome:P haha tankew :P Mine is tankchu :)

[mark]

awww :) lol i dont mind writing babe and im not that good at it :) thanks for thinking so though :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

you are you have a talent for it :)

[mark]

awww thank you hunny :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)

[annabellee]

cute poem, well written and I really like the picture you used, so adorable :)
well penned :)

[mark]

awww thank you anna :)
thanks i thought it was a cute one too :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)