Pleasure

Pleasure

A Poem by Valandil93

There once was a time when life was quite simple. 
However, that wasn’t sublime enough to please the pimple.

© 2011 Valandil93


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Does simplicity truly beget pleasure? Nice job with the brevity. And I hope that pimple was figurative...

one last thing, a note on diction:
"sublime"
great. 'nough said.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love it, short and straight to point ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Was life simple before you got pimples? lol (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like ittt!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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