"When Days Are Numbered"

"When Days Are Numbered"

A Poem by Valentine
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Watching my sister die of cancer was a painful thing for her and for me. I still look up at Heaven and say hello to her..

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'When Days Are Numbered'

Never
come back...
nor ask me, why?
I turned away,
and let...
love die.
Never think
of me
again.
Be a stranger,
or be a
friend.
God has numbered
all of my days.
So few left,
no words to say.
Cry today...
then let it go.
Death brings pain...
ask me...
I know!
 
Valentine 
 
© 2009 momsgirl2 (All rights reserved)

 

© 2012 Valentine


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like many of your writes, this is heart-wrenching. you certainly pour your heart into them and move the reader to tears, Kathie. may she rest in peace.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Valentine

5 Years Ago

When a family remains close through a lifetime, it hurts to lose them one by one. Kathie
a powerful emotional write , lovely work and expressed so well. sorry for your loss Valentine. I see cancers everyday working in histopathology and life deals out a cruel hand to many.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Valentine

5 Years Ago

Yes it does, sadly it leaves little hope of survival. Thank you for reading my write. Kathie
After reading this my eyes were tearful.... Its an extremely emotional poem and you seem like a wonderful person.... It must be very hard... Like i can't even imagine my life without any one of my family members.... Its heart touching... Love it,,, truely amazingg....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Valentine

6 Years Ago

Yes, it does hurt when a loved one is lost. The best feeling is when you know they have gone to be .. read more
Nene

6 Years Ago

You might be right
very sad to read this one Kathie, although the subject is extremely painful to you the poetry is beautiful, well done :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Valentine

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review Richard. Kathie
I could really feel the sadness behind every word of this poem. I can relate to what you are going through. Im sorry for your loss, and Im certain your sister would be proud of you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Valentine

6 Years Ago

I was more proud of her Dan, she was a fighter. Kathie
Powerful words are written down here for all to read and learn.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Valentine

6 Years Ago

Thank you Smitty. Kathie
Wow, I start by saying that this is pretty sad because its about someone who is about to die.
It really grabbs my heart.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Valentine

6 Years Ago

Yes, she was my oldest sister, and I miss her very much. Valentine
This was really emotional yet beautiful

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cool Girl

6 Years Ago

I bet she was..
She's still watching over you though :)
Valentine

6 Years Ago

When ever we saw a red cardinal I asked all to pray for her healing. To this day I receive cards et.. read more
Cool Girl

6 Years Ago

That's so wonderful. It must be very touching :)
wow i enjoy this one, its sad but enchanting.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Valentine

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading my poeKathie
a sad write,dying can be painful to others

Posted 6 Years Ago


Valentine

6 Years Ago

Yes, I have lost family members and my husband, it hurts knowing you will never see them again on th.. read more
 wordman

6 Years Ago

yes I know how you feel if we could imagine heaven we could be content

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