"Love's Gift"

 "Love's Gift"

 

Eyes that sparkle, in the sun,

When another day is done.

Smiles that light up...the whole sky,

And the heart stops...to wonder why.

 

One face can bring, such joy and bliss;

With just the touch, of one sweet kiss.

A gentle heart...that brings such peace;

"Hope", that tells all fear to...cease.

 

Lips that speak, of tomorrows dreams;

The promise that...each kiss brings.

Once in a lifetime this love comes along,

To a heart that is...gentle...yet strong.

 

Open up your life, to accept God's gift...

As love's heart opens, to all life has missed.

 

Valentine

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Poet.
"Open up your life, to accept God's gift...
As love's heart opens, to all life has missed."
Life is a fine teacher. Make us learn. enjoy the good days and forget the bad days. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cassie]

Gods love is the best best gift, we see it everyday by the daily blessings we receive. The sacrifice of His son. Indeed lets daily open up our life to accept Gods gift

[Valentine]

I agree with you Cassie, who else would have given so much. Kathie

[Twistedwords]

This gives me the feeling of pure love in such an innocent form. Well written! :D

[Valentine]

This was written to my husband before his passing. Kathie

[Twistedwords]

pure love indeed

[Stanley R. Teater]

Another fine effort. I enjoyed it very much.

[Valentine]

Thank you Stanley. Kathie

[Lorry]

This just flows so well and perfectly captures love's gift. I can't really add to that, other than to say that nothing stands out, because every line is in it's place, creating a complete picture perfectly. I don't usually give rating scores, but this is getting 100 :)

[Valentine]

Thank you. My average rating is high, if you do not give a rating to each read it will lower it for all writers. Kathie

[Einstein Noodle]

i feel the warmth and comfort in your lines ..so positive in this chaotic times ..i like the layers of this .. selfless love of the human heart and of the heart of God ... so ... actually ..one can experience love twice ;)) maybe even three times :)))))))
E.

[Paul Bell]

Well writen Kathie. Could be in church singing it.

[Valentine]

Thank you Paul for your kind words. Kathie

[wordman]

beautiful words,love will always live on

[Valentine]

In our hearts Ron. Kathie