Moonlight and Wine

Moonlight and Wine

A Poem by Valentine

         Moonlight and Wine

Moonlight...and rich burgundy wine.
Locked inside of, this heart of mine.
With this "thought", a warm embrace;
Which over the years, has lost its face.

             Valentine

© 2017 Valentine


Author's Note

Valentine
Just words.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

A very simple, touching, and true poem Valentine, as usual! I've experienced the longing that memories can bring, as well as (literally) the inability to remember faces clearly. But I do remember the feelings; the warmth, and the love. I think that's what brings about the longing for me
Well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


A warm and yet sad vision of fading memories. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Romantic and yet a bit poignant. Lovely. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


Valentine

7 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia, I am appreciative of your reviews. Kathie
It seems with age we lose either the faces or the names of once dear friends or acquaintances. It's sad.
At least I haven't forgotten mine, yet!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Valentine

7 Years Ago

Ted, that means your mind is still good. Sad thing is if you haven't seen someone in a real long ti.. read more
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
.
Bittersweet memories stirring under the light of the moon with the sweet taste of nectar on the lips.

The senses are renowned for stirring up thoughts and memories. A smell. A taste. A touch. And all the feelings from the past rise to the surface.

Brief, but nicely written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Valentine

7 Years Ago

How true, but even memories fade with time. Kathie
you had me at wine...
especially a good cab- my favorite.
moonlight and wine-
is almost never had alone.
somehow both make us want someone
by our side. -Bacchus

Posted 7 Years Ago


Valentine

7 Years Ago

Had to smile, I haven't had a drink of any kind in years. Allergic to alcohol. Kathie
You said a handful in so few words. Time can be a heavy burden for us. When places and faces are missed. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Valentine

7 Years Ago

Thank you John, drink too much and you might not even remember that face. Kathie
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I try this a few times. Didn't work and you welcome Kathie.
Beautiful and sorrowful. I love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Valentine

7 Years Ago

Barb, just words, never tasted that certain one. Kathie
nice work Valentine ..short and moving .. so much of us is locked inside ..some pining, some waiting patiently ..some simply glowing ... we should do our best to remember those faces ...we too easily forget sometimes
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Valentine

7 Years Ago

Just words, I am allergic to alcohol . Tasted it when younger though as most of us did. Kathie
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

ell...the words create quite the ambiance tho i have no idea what the real taste is .. have had diff.. read more
sounds like sweet memories,moonlight and wine

Posted 7 Years Ago


This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Valentine

7 Years Ago

Drinking in moderation if one thing, my older sisters husband was an alcoholic, and very mean and ab.. read more
 wordman

7 Years Ago

lol,i drank very little,case of beer a year,maybe a bottle of bourbon in a year or so

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

466 Views
10 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 7, 2017
Last Updated on January 7, 2017

Author

Valentine
Valentine

MI



About
No one special. Just another person sharing what she writes. more..

Writing
Just Me Just Me

A Poem by Valentine



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..