Please tell Me

Please tell Me

A Poem by Valentine

      Please Tell Me

 

Just what would it take,

for me...

to reach inside

of your heart?

Stir up all of

the old memories

we once had,

before love did depart.

How can I

reach deeply into

your heart and

into your soul?

Try to recapture

just what is needed,

to help me make

my life again whole.

Will you let old

memories walk

slowly through your

heart and your mind.

Uncover pictures

of the bliss

and heaven found

in sweet olden times.

Please let me

take a few

moments to bask

in the distant past.

The long days before

our love fell apart

with no chance

to ever last!

Just what would it take,

to reach inside of

your  heart

and reach your soul?

Find the broken

pieces needed

to make our lives

again whole.

     Valentine  3-8-08

© 2008 Valentine


Author's Note

Valentine
Just trying a new approach to an old poem of mine..God bless..Valentine

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A lovely sweet poem here with a gentle flow

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading my scribbles Andrew. Kathie
wellit wouldn`t take any more this time than the first time

Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

my sister`s
Valentine

8 Years Ago

My oldest sister is gone too, also 3 brothesr, luckily there were 9 of us so 1 brother and 3 sister.. read more
 wordman

8 Years Ago

i have one sister left she can`t hear,i hardly ever see her
Heart felt. Like a lonely walk down a smooth path in the woods on a drizzly day. You made me feel the "quiet."
Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I am curious about this issue for long.
I have found some answers from this amazing poem and its reviews.
Congratulations,Valentine!!!

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Well I say that your "new" approach has scored highly this is well written as is your wont my friend you always seem to bring forth with chrystle clairity the essence of the subject you are writing about much like anothwer lady of our mutual aqutience.

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is both sadness and strength flowing here... trying to recapture the love that once was... You bring to light the courage that true love holds.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very well constructed refrain effect, and I loved the casual rhymes. Thanks for the read. Keep writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


When something is broken it is quite a work to put it back together but we should always try.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Solid write, and heart felt too! i can feel the longing of wanting to put the relationship back together.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Amazing piece my dear. You always make one feel the sweet touch of love yet that underlining feel of sorrow still lingers deep within.. This was another treasure..

Hugs and much love,
Mags xx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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