Hate

Hate

A Poem by Vampyre of Fantasy

I am tired of being angry all the time,

I am tired of hating so much.

 

I want to be a child again,

Before they were taught to hate.

They are so happy, so kind,

They don't care what people think.

 

I want to be 2 months old.

Everything new,

Everything fresh,

Looking at the world with new eyes.

 

I want to be two,

So innocent,

So loving,

Looking at the world with curiosity.

 

I want to be six,

Learning sharing,

Letters, numbers,

Looking at the world with ambition.

 

I am tired of knowing what the world is like,

I simply want to be a child.

© 2012 Vampyre of Fantasy


Author's Note

Vampyre of Fantasy
Not my best, but just having an overall bad day.

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Hate... never a good thing, but I can understand "Cause you had a bad day. You're taking one down. You sing a sad song just to turn it around" Anyways even if it might not be you best as you say... it atleast can relieve some internal stress and bent up tension, venting. Simple yet so very true write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good read, but I think the word "so" is repetitive in this. I only give constructive criticism, sorry, It's all I've known in school! Now replying to your emotion for this write. With so much hate in the world, the pattern has to end sometime, I say to myself. Do we want to add fire to this existing fire, or do we want to attempt a resolution for this widespread confusion we call Earth? I hope your day was well today.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is so true...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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