A Barista's Haiku

For my time employed as the little barista girl that handled legal drug deals.

Espresso you fine

on a dime cannot deny

that I'm satisfied

Steam me up, Pour me

Adore all my froth and foam

I'll be your last drop

Hate to say goodbye

Inevitably time passed

God F*****g Damn-it

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

especially love the last one...
these could almost make me like coffee...
j.

[Nigel Newman]

Interesting to have 3 haikus which between them tell more than one sometimes is able. I might try this approach. There's some challenging word craft in here - inevitably, for heaven's sake!!! However, you've gone one syllable too far on that line - easy fix would be 'passed' instead of 'passes'

[Attentive_Ambience]

This is why it's good to have a second set of eyes read your work. Thank you again for pointing that out. I'm always missing something when I edit my work. :) I'm glad you liked it.