Hollow Haiku

Hollow and Shallow
But a heart that is broken
Is hard to follow

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Nice twist on words . . . you're saying this is hollow & shallow as we're feeling how multi-layered & thought-provoking your declaration is! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[VelvetPotato]

Thanks for the love, Margie!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love this senryu...

not hollow at all, but depth between the lines and short verse.
j.

[VelvetPotato]

Thanks, j.!