Caged

Caged

A Poem by VelvetRosetta
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Let him be free...

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Caged

 

Free the song from the fleeting bird

Hum his tune til the new found spring.

Sonnets of the seasons perishing.

Songbird sings threw his fleeting glee

Perched silently he flaps his wings

He will not sing til he is freed…

 

Free the song from the fleeting bird

While he’s caged away he will not be heard.



J.Cruz

© 2012 VelvetRosetta


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birds are the songs that fly...that music singing in the morn...when we cage them we silence their freedom...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

He will not sing til he is freed…
I feel like I can relate to this caged bird. WC allows me to sing freely. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this is amazing i really liked this :))) mind takin a look at some of my work? thanks :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the idea of freedom associated with this. I say release the bird from its cage and let it sing! Well penned. Keep up the great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is like a lovely song.....love it J.!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 27, 2011
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 VelvetRosetta
VelvetRosetta

Fajardo, Puerto Rico



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