Amorous

Amorous

A Poem by Veramor

Amorous


He says this word as Amor-Us


Meaning she was Love-ly


She exudes love from her pores and he felt it just by standing near her


Her eyes had the depth of an ocean he wanted to dive into and backstroke, breaststroke and doggie paddle in


The kind of eyes that opened up new galaxies and worlds with just a 2 second stare


Her mouth


Her Amor-us mouth that spoke words and made them sound like new colours


Words like apple, ball, cat, dog were given the fullness, depth and mystery of a rainbow when uttered from her mouth.


Her Laugh


Her Amor-Us, Love-ly mouth laugh sent him on a magic carpet ride through Orion’s belt at the speed of light


She was Amor-Us


She was a drug that he, unashamedly, was addicted to


She was Amor


She seeped love from her pores and he felt it just from looking at her


Her presence was his adrenaline


Her smile his insulin


Her scent his Dope-amine


She is Amor


He is Sin Amor


She vanished into the dark of day and took his everything


With the blink of an eye she was gone


Taking his adrenaline, insulin and dope-amine


 She was


And he was left standing in the middle of that Starbucks on his flat tyred magic carpet chasing a colourless rainbow. 

© 2011 Veramor


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This poem was sad and beautiful at the same time. I really enjoyed it. Only mistake I saw: last line says 'tyred'....I think you meant 'tired'.

Please mark this constructive and review me back!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on November 2, 2011
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Tags: love, loss, infatuation

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Veramor
Veramor

Milton Keynes, bucks, United Kingdom



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