If I Could Smoke in Color

Look! The smoke dances and twirls on rainbow Up in the sea blue sky New feathers caressing the clouds Growing into smokey splashes of light Calling to to me, is the beauty of the sky All watch as I grow high on it's beauty Never leaving my sight, rainbow smoke arises from my chest Catching my breath against it's wonders Everytime I inhale, I choke on it's marble reflection Raining colors across the room If only I could smoke in these colors Never more the smokey gray Catastrophic fatilities Opening the new sky Letting in the grey, others search for a new light Our colorful cigarettes creating a new bang Rainbow deaths will fly

Author's Note

This was a poem I wrote. It goes along with the words all that glitters is not gold. If you smoke in color, it can still hurt you.

Reviews

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"If only I could smoke in these colors
Never more the smokey gray"
~~i love this line & the entire poem is luxurious~~~~

(Brazo)

:)

[Michael X]

i thought this poem had awsome rhythm and imagery, excellent job :)

[Initium]

I like this.
I think it all comes together at the end, because honestly, reading the first stanza, I was frowning.
I like this, once more to say.