Pain.

Oh pain! Just leave me be.

It pierces my heart so deep the wound I can't withstand.

My conscience is like that frenzied maelstrom

That wreaks the vagaries of my esteemed vengeance

I vow to you like that of a woman scorned

You whilst find the pieces that have tantamount 

This stinking stench you have bestowed!

Reviews

[SeventeenPoet]

Sorry i read this so late! I had my exams and it was terrifying! anyway...beautiful as ever Ver...Inespecially loved ghe line 'the wreaks the vagaries of my esteemed vengeance' haha

[Neon]

Your this write forced me to say what I always say that I damn Hate seeing someone as sizzling as you get hurt right into the depth of her sexy heart .. after all your heart's what that's made for spreading scent and yeah! sometimes giving pain into lovers heart but not getting hurt into yours. So, Keep hurting, keep smiling, keep spreading the scent of yours as well as as keep loosing the beat of every man who've felt your scent and of course keep killing their heart with the weapon of your eyes that sometimes kill men when your eyes start doing "Blink! Blink! Blink!

[MsJewel]

I could feel the emotion in your words Veronica. You have touched my heart with this one.

:) Julie

[Veronica DiMarco]

Thank you Julie... we women do have sentiments when it comes to hating.. hahaha

;]

[Trace]

Isn't love and pain a unique human emotion.
no matter where in the world we live, we all share these feelings.
you write of them so powerfully in this piece,
as though you know them first hand.

Very well done. Trace

[Veronica DiMarco]

comes from the heart Trace.. hehehe

thank you... I've been down and up once again.. :)

[Sami Khalil]

The words and the imagery are powerful for this emotion...Bravo

[Veronica DiMarco]

powerful indeed! I try to write from the heart.

thank you Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow such wrath emanates from your words.I would'nt want to be at the recieving end of this angry piece lol.I love how your fiery words leap of the page every word like a slap on the face.Bravo veronica a truly heartfelt piece,beautifully penned:)

[Veronica DiMarco]

Thank you Vidya!

your words are truly taken in!
thank you very much...I try my best to be motivated by all of you, words are always there and you just have to put them piece by piece like a puzzle and create good poetry like all of you!

once again thank you! ;]

[Vidya Bacchus]

Beautifully said my friend,you are welcome:)