Haiku-Hopeful

Feeling a bit better about certain things.

Hope flows right through me

The sun seems to shine brighter

I can breathe again

Things be changing

Life will get better slowly

I'm given a chance

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A well written short poem...Bravo......................

[Jack Kennedy]

I'm a senryu guy myself (tried haiku's) but I really like your haiku and Im definitely taking notes!!

[A. Amos]

Simply splendid, enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing