No Name

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No Name

The Regiment is coming back

A regiment of a battle I’ve passed

Fought through

Tortured too

A Civil war against myself

One part reluctant

The rest running to the wall

Setup in self

To tear down all waves

Of fog

Of frustration

Of smug and smart haze

It’s killing me, painfully sucking

Any energy left

As I am a weary soldier

Whose been through this battle before

Surrender is no choice existant

To either side it is extinction or exaltation

Of self

Pure Hatred, regret, reality

Coarsing through

I am empty, though, enveloped

Within this frame!

Surrendering, I give up!, take over Nothing

Leave, no trace

Whatever you must do, Fin!

No need of victory, nor arrogance

A simple peace shall leave me be

Therefore I beg of you!:

Regiment Leave

You do ne need

Break thy soul, please let it cool

From magma to stone

No memory made

Only pain from the needle

Which insisted this poison upon my vein

Absolute,

Torturous,

Yet numb and black,

Pain

Leave that scar

And I’ll fill in the stitches

Nevermore shall I wish for your glance

Or remember your Identity

More than is needed

Or comes back to me

Run, you lost, unneeded fight

Everletting your blood, forceful torturement!

,Will I remember…

By quarantine_deathangel

Author's Note

No name is a person that, i had probably more than just a crush on, I gave them this nock name since I knew their face and their personality and forgot their name which was the first thing they had mentioned to me. And it's true that if you want a person to fall in love with you, telling them everything accept your name and nuber, it totally gets em XD any way, there was a lot more than that and it's pretty much why I'm so regretful now and thats what the poem is about, so enjoy! Also, I tried to make it as close copied to the original writing, which was in cursive, to give the true expression in the poem and the last line oertains not to the line before it although to the six beginning line letters above it ;)

Reviews

[Abhishekizy]

Loved the following Lines...........

" A regiment of a battle I've passed
Fought through
Tortured too
A Civil war against myself
One part reluctant
The rest running to the wall."

It so fluid that it shows how comfortable you are with your words and your thoughts. Beautiful write

[Kiari Sabon]

i really love this and i understand these thing like chaos and the pain helps fog it even more great write

[quarintine_deathangel]

Thankyou! I know it's pretty relateable and common but this guy was a special case... somehow XD

[Jaxter_Nick]

it is funny how you spelled no-more into the last few sentences
and u used purple feather dude! xp

[Kaylor Mason]

Pity you forgot the name . . .

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the struggle and the strong emotions in the poem. I like the internal thoughts and strong statements in the poem. I like the way you ended the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

i liked this piece of art, it really grabs your attention and its very relatable.