Of this Dark Angel

Of this Dark Angel

A Poem by kyrie
"

just somethin....

"

Black and leathery,

shiny and torn

Whispers of misery;

 

These are the Wings...

 

Chants are sent

beyond the grave

With great lament;

 

These are the Lips...

 

Dead and hollow,

barely alive,

Shadowed and shallow;

 

These are the Eyes...

 

Cold to the touch,

ever so pale,

Loving so much;

 

These are the Hands...

 

Lost and wandering

'round the world

Of souls expiring;

 

This is the Life...

 

Of this Dark Angel

© 2011 kyrie


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kyrie
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this is amazing! love the "dark angel" display and what it is like! great use of words and the poem catches you right in the beginning

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think you did a good job with this poem. It was easy to follow, and easy to understand. I didn't feel your emotions in the poem though. It just didn't feel like it was something that was very personal to you. The structure of the poem is good. I would describe the hair or the soul underneath the eyes of the angel as an improvement to the poem. Overall I have to say you did a good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Heya there :D My name is Kyrie (KEAR-ee-ay), but call me Ky. I had an account on here, but it got all messed up, and so I have this one now. I love to laugh and enjoy people. I'm a bit of an ecce.. more..

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