The Glass

The Glass

A Poem by kyrie
"

The source of Never-Ending torture

"

Robs her breath

                                Blinds her eyes

           Taunts her death

                           Tells her lies.

 

Trapped so delicately

With so many tears

To drown in.

                                (Robs her breath)

Angels sing comfortingly

Yet they can't match

Her pain within.

                                (Blinds her eyes)

Blood flows violently

From the ugly wound

She can't hide.

                                (Taunts her death)

Stories told vividly

By her own words

From voices inside.

                                (Tells her lies)

© 2011 kyrie


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kyrie
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beautifully phrased..and very poignant..a dark beauty this one is..good to see you writing again :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I honestly don't see what you're trying to persuade people to do in this poem...but i like it all the same! the rhyming scheme works well with the topic!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love it. It flows so well and reading it is intense. I can feel all the pain and frustration and loss within the poem. It really is a great right. Dark, intense and flowing. Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Amazing work! The flow is well paced, keeps the reader drawn into an abyss! lol
Stunning and I love it, so claustrophobic and intense
xx


Posted 10 Years Ago


A very dark and edgy poem. This is a great poem written by you. The structure of the poem is different from what I'm use to, but its different in a very good way. Each line at the beginning of the poem is elaborated on further within the poem. I think you did a good job here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow...this is so dark, but so wondrously expressed...I feel the pain, the sorrow, the loss...and I relate to those abysmal musings, those emotions that crush the spirit.
I hope you are writing metaphorically here, Kyrie ! I LOVE the title...so very apt and clever :)


Posted 10 Years Ago



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Heya there :D My name is Kyrie (KEAR-ee-ay), but call me Ky. I had an account on here, but it got all messed up, and so I have this one now. I love to laugh and enjoy people. I'm a bit of an ecce.. more..

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