Life I want to Live

It doesn't rhyme but has all what i want in real :) and got what i was looking for

I can't buy you expensive diamond rings
I can't buy you that expensive dress you like
I can buy you few chocolates & roses
I can give you what I have; my heart which loves you pure.

I have a dream to give you a car
I even have a dream to give you a home
Where we will both live and enjoy life
I will come home from work, you will kiss me

You will share your work, and tell me you missed me
I will hug you tight and take you to the bedroom
We will make love, enjoyment and fun
We will sleep holding each other’s comfort

I would love to have you in my life
To complete it and to be my wife
Love has been all lies till now
Just be with me and I will do as you want

Author's Note

Just review it ;) Thanks again

Reviews

[tuvi]

rhyme and sync is not always whats required in poetry ...
U need to have the feelings and a person to understand those feelings .....when anyone is able to relate to your work to themselves ...that's the true task achieve because you were able to touch someone's life/ heart even if little but your thoughts struck them ....

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Tuvi :)
Your review always bring smile on my face ;)

God bless you :)
-Singh :)

[tuvi]

aww .. thank you viks.. :)

[Leigh]

Your emotions lead the way in this one and sometimes thats enough, I like the reality of the themes you have chosen.

[Titan]

Simple life your asking and again this one was so special and touching one.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for visit and reviewing my poem.
- Singh :)

[Cybertooth]

I would love to have you in my life
To complete it and to be my wife
Love has been all lies till now
Just be with me and I will do as you want

Everyone want this life great work

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for visit and reviewing my poem.
- Singh :)

[Supercop]

I can't buy you expensive diamond rings
I can't buy you that expensive dress you like
I can buy you few chocolates & roses
I can give you what I have; my heart which loves you pure.

What a Narration my friend this is outstanding.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for visit and reviewing my poem.
- Singh :)

[Ankita]

It's beautiful. Such honesty in the lines you have written! It's pure and simple and has everything one can ever ask for i.e. Love.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Ankita :)
Thanks for sucha beautiful comments :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a pure, tender love expressed here... the kind to last a lifetime... Yes, to have a love where just being together is paradise, that could satisfy any heart. Thanks for sharing the beauty and power of true love.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Craig :)
I'm happy you liked my work :)
Cheers :)
Singh :)

[allura]

i really enjoyed this piece! A simple desire, a simple dream. Nothing fancy, or extravagant.
There is beauty in the simplicity of life some times.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Allura :)

Much Appreciated :)
Singh :)

[Marie]

I dislike love poetry, yet I find this charming.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks for your true comments Marie :)
I really respect it :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[smilempsn]

Emotions are beautifully wrapped in this piece.. :)
nicely written VikrantSingh Parmar..

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Smilempsn :)

Thanks you so much :)