Unborn Grief - Girls

Unborn Grief - Girls

A Poem by Vikrantsingh
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This was very touching/strong.This normally happens in India.. I tried to pottery something which is real and which happens everyday - resources.

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I'm in nirvana with angels

Got all love from them

Looking down

Weeping upside down

Trenchant for my mater 

Even for that begetter 

I was your part my mater

Wished to develop firm and tall

Just like my brother

But I was bumped off 

By my begetter

What was my mistake?

Is it just I was doll? 

I prayed for you mater

You live longer and stay firm

You loved me every single moment

You feed me with love and notions

Next time I want to be your doll

Please don't murder me

Live with me & don't leave me alone.




© 2013 Vikrantsingh


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Vikrantsingh
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Hmm.... that made me sad and happy at the same moment :(
Sad, because it actually happens at a much higher growth in India
Happy, because you wrote and described it so wonderfully..

The grief...the feelings wrapped in words beautifully..
nice one VikrantSingh Parmar....

Another amazing write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Smilemspn :) Loved the review :)
- Singh :)



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You wrote well about a sad topic around the world. The title says it all "Unborn Grief."

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Victoria :)
So touchy and expressed.
I'm so amazed with this feelings how people can do this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)
This is reality if so then you have mastered it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)
Great read and write :) Its reality :O that's shocking nicely penned my friend

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)
I love the pictures you have here.. the poem gave me a melancholy feel.. I tried to send you a couple of rr but you dont accept them I guess.. so how can i get you to read? lol xoxo Rose

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rose :)
I will accept it I just disabled because I have more than 160 Read r.. read more
shallimarRose

7 Years Ago

LOL yes, I get so many and then sometimes I have only a few.. I have to keep reading every day I fal.. read more
Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

Same here i just skipped few days and they turned up to 200+ request :(
Hmm.... that made me sad and happy at the same moment :(
Sad, because it actually happens at a much higher growth in India
Happy, because you wrote and described it so wonderfully..

The grief...the feelings wrapped in words beautifully..
nice one VikrantSingh Parmar....

Another amazing write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Smilemspn :) Loved the review :)
- Singh :)
You have taken a serious situation and approached it in a most creative way here my friend.
Thank you for this. It certainly presents facts in not only a poet, but revealing light to all concerned.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Poetdoug :) Much appreciated your words and your reviews :)
poetdoug

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome my friend
Oh dear... this is sooooooooooooo heartfelt! It brought tears to my eyes...seriously...
The pictures are amazing, and your words are tangible tendrils coming from the heart and soul of an Angel. Beautifully displayed, Singh!~xoxo~

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Robbie :) Thanks for your review again :)
It really helps :)
Robbie~xoxo~

7 Years Ago

I'm glad, it's my pleasure. :)
Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

^ - ^ Thank you :)
We know not what we do and think there aren't any consequences. It will be a rude awakening. Splendid read and write on a very sensitive issue. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

Welcome Brandon :) Thank you so much for your review and upliftment :)
- Singh :)
a nice and touching write. it a sad event that happens even today and its not poor or illiterate who do it but even the literates and so called elite ones.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Yes we await for the day when there will be human love for one and all only.
Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

Yes indeed :)
Prritiy

7 Years Ago

........... :)

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