Erstwhile Jacket

Mood swings - made me write this :/

Got up at 12:39 PM with a vexation

Whisky bottles all over empty

Eyeballs became reddish

Wept a lot last nighttime

Your missives were on my table

You said naught

Left me dumb

Cigarette butt all over

I got up fatigue and decrepit

Got my old jacket on my knee

Washed my face

Got dressed

Went to have a coffee at la cafeteria

Thinking of old memories regarding us

Lightened up the last weed rolled cig

Hands inside the jacket

Got your last missives

Suggesting me you're long gone

With the night, I killed myself.

Reviews

[Prritiy]

hmm a hurt heart but never ever think what you thought at end.

just remember all those who still love you and how they will be without you, your parents, siblings, life partner, kids and that they will forever blame themselves for no fault of theirs and those living will die everyday, every moment....

best wishes

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you for your visit Prritiy.. I'm glad you liked it ;)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)
how is the lil angel :)

[Vikrantsingh]

She's great :) thanks

[Prritiy]

:)...........

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

As someone else said in a review already "sounds like a rough night" indeed. A lot of feelings to cause this write, it's good to vent them. Good write, I like how realistic it is as you describe things through out the day that take place.

[Astro]

Sounds like a rough night and an even rougher day. Interesting write from you Singh.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you for your visit Astro.. I'm glad you liked it ;)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Ruth]

What better way to purge those emotions than to allow them to dance, whether in anguish or not x

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you for your visit Poppy Ruth Silver.. I'm glad you liked it ;)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Konnie]

This is a really lovely piece. You let raw emotion pour through each line The pain stabs through and demands the readers attention while remaining self-oriented. Awesome work! (BTW, first piece I've labeled a favorite.)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Konnie.. Much appreciated your review and your visit :)
I'm glad you liked it :)
- Cheers!
Singh :)

[Traci]

I've never read such a dark piece from you Singh. This was a very honest write with intense emotion that was heartfelt. I think we all have our moments of darkness, mood swings that leave us unresponsive to the love that surrounds us. But we have angels that look over us, and that is our saving grace ... so thankful you are in a much better place, my friend. Stay strong, and in the light. Much love to you always.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Traci :) I know - what you mean to explain here. I have beautiful life and ppl around me like you and my family :)
Thanks for your concern :)
- Cheers!
Singh :)

[Traci]

Always a pleasure my friend, your words, even in times of darkness, hold much love

[Vikrantsingh]

Aww thank you so much Traci :)

[Mark]

wow... You paint such a complete picture of hangover with heartache here. The last line is a shocker makes me want to be there and say 'DUDE! Smoke another one first. don't do anything drastic!" Heart break.... it hurts so bad but let it flow, learn, go find love again. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Mark :) this review is really great I appreciate your visit :)
Yes, we would had fun and let plan something like this ;) all poets together having fun ;)
- Singh :)

[Zero_Edge88]

Sami, did you steal that jacket from my closet? I haven't worn that my brother I feel like I am missing it as of late! I hope you didn't take it because if you did, that's not good. Those kinds of jackets bring bad juju and memories for sure!

Be happy my friend you better put on that good coat instead because the loves of your life wouldn't want to have cold nights without you. They have you to keep loving for who you are my dear brother! My friend, it is not worth the act of doing it because your life is more important than anything. You're a wonderful person that will shine on! So shine on my friend and never forget :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much brother - I mean jacket (my body : which leave at the end) lol you made me laugh.. But why Sami? I got confused o-O.. Well i hope you were talking about me :P
lol no probs thanks for your visit and review
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Zero_Edge88]

Sorry I was so tired my brother lol! My egregiousness cost that a lot! :P Yes I know it is your body that you were talking about on that piece for sure :D
And hey you're very welcome I'm glad I did stop by and visit my great brother for sure!
Cheers!
Zero :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Been there done that. Good work bro

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much BR :)