Sleepstream

A shared view.

I follow a path of sleepstream

Another day to another, endless

Continuation of eyes closed

I gather thoughts up and see

In a fashionable warmth

I applaud this feeling

 

And so do I feel

Among a cycle of norm, sleepstream

Deprived, and sought after warmth

Opening eyes in an endless

Strain of all the things I see

I just want to keep them closed

 

For a little while only, then close

I must do; to get that feel

Of the relief of not seeing

Through this sleepstreamed

Tunnel vision, endless

Sensation of warm

 

I self-realize a vibratory warmth

A way to spoil that closed-

Minded approach of love endlessness

Meaning well, instilling a feeling

I gather data through the sleepstream

Let’s me think I see

 

Then I forget all I have seen

Realize that down to earth is warming

An idea of separation from the sleepstream's

Duality realities; closing

The half-open door to omitting the feel

Of endlessness

 

The occasion of slavery is ending

We are finally starting to see

But can you, with whole heart, feel?

Is it not warming?

Lust, hate, and fear; coming to a close 

Gathering thoughts to live the sleepstream

 

I follow endless paths of warmth

Another day I see, to another shut closed

Leaving this continuation of feeling; as my eyes gaze into the sleeping stream. 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Phoen-ix]

I find this piece brilliant. I wish I could say more, but I'm a little lost for words..Good job.

[V. P. Trujillo]

Thanks, Amy.

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice and well written poem...Thank you for penning...:)..................

[V. P. Trujillo]

Thank you for reviewing.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)....................

[zainul]

This is a wonderful and eloquent elaboration of sleepstream.

[V. P. Trujillo]

Thank you, zainul. Very much so.

[zainul]

You are most welcome,Vince.:)

[Michelle N. H.]

It's easier to follow the stream than to go against it, the good thing is it's changing course. Creed in the background.. brill. :)

[V. P. Trujillo]

Thank you, my dear.

[Michelle N. H.]

You're welcome, love.

[TheLoneWriter]

Very beautiful poem! You explained such a "small" moment with so much detail! Very well written! Sweet and soft!

[V. P. Trujillo]

I'm honored. Gracias.

[TheLoneWriter]

No problem!