Mental Masochist

Mental Masochist

A Poem by Vin
"

Don't let anyone step on you, strike back

"

 

I like the feeling when you cut me down,
I love it when you kick me around,
it gets me on when my blood hits the ground,
but only metaphorically.

It's lovely when you crush my dreams,
or s**t on all my hair-brained schemes,
or back-stab me until I bleed,
but only metaphorically.

I hope you take me seriously,
and keep on beating up on me,
so that I'll snap and kill you back,
but this time, I mean literally.

© 2010 Vin


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Haha, very rhythmic. I like ending lines of each stanza, it keeps it strong with every word you carved in here. You're very creative :) I really enjoy this one.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing job I love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is so edgy!
"I hope you take me seriously,
and keep on beating up on me,
so that I'll snap and kill you back,
but this time, I mean literally."
Love the ending.
This write is intense and admirable.
Keep up the great work!

-Elissa :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ha ha! This is to cute I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


lol very cute :) kinda radical but cute :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A direct and to the point poem. You took me in with strong lines. Ending the poem with a perfect ending. If you kick a dog enough. He will bite back. A outstanding poem. Strong and to the point. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Vin
Vin

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