Fair Battle

Woooh! Vengeance XD

 

 

At the water cascading, you begin to shiver,

as it bitterly turns into a crimson red river.

Let your eyes fade as the floor pools with tears,

scream your heart out even though no one else hears.

Slipping under deep, are you ready to let go?

You're inhaling water and your air is getting low.

Can you feel the pressure of all you chose to be?

You were so determined to make it, even if it meant hurting me.

Too late for apologies, your words are forming a rope,

as they wrap around your neck I sit and watch you choke.

I was your newest obsession, my name always on your lips,

but now it's your turn to feel Death's welcoming kiss.

The clouds are rolling in, and it's time I make a stand,

it's time to think for myself and it's time that I fight back.

Biting your nails as I put you on the spot,

you start it, I finish it, but I will come out on top.

Always outside my back door, my stalker in the night,

you chose to start the game and now you'll pay the price.

You played your part well and spoke your insults of sin,

but guess what Sweetheart? I still win.

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this poem. It was very powerful and their was a lot of imagery..I could imagine the rope going around the persons throat and them choking...good job on this powerful piece. Thanks for sharing. :)

[HorrorMaster]

A very powerful poem. Keep up the good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I like the feel of strength and no fear. Able to stand strong and win. I like the story in your words. Last line made the poem perfect. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Bette]

absolutely wonderful, full of strength (i love strength, you cant brake me cuz ill break you first poems.lol) and your flow is on.... very very good job.

[G. Anderson]

Beauteous in a very slanderous way... It captures the emotion vividly and paints it across the page for all to experience.

Lovely.

Gage Anderson

[Ruth]

This is executed in a manner that leaves the reader thinking about the power directed back to the person! lol
Awesome love, potently hitting, powerful, great imagery hon, excellent write
xx

[Jonathan De Elvira]

wow,
sounds like you're writting something about my relationship though...
good stuff..

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

Very nice hon, you have talent yourself. Just keep following your imagination and you are destined to succeed in life.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow love the gusty stand you take... the attitude to survive rises through your words... never say die... quite an inspirational speech to the heart.