You (a word palindrome)

a word palindrome

Life- this for love! My plan to fail?

I maybe think you

are many of one that understand

plights of perception and points of view.

That those eyes and ears trust not,

should I error in judgment of thoughts;

those randomly dictate or construe

feelings- these wary and few hopes I sought.

Abuse of heart you lost. Have I gone too far?

I’m confused and complaining. Are people

really, truly, similar and unchanging? We are.

Alone work I, deranged and distraught.

You know I did little for

~You~

For little did I know you.

Distraught and deranged, I work alone.

Are we unchanging and similar, truly? Really

people are complaining and confused. I’m

far too gone. I have lost you, heart of abuse.

Sought I, hopes, few and wary. These feelings

construe, or dictate randomly, those

thoughts of judgment in error. I should

not trust ears and eyes, those that

view of points and perception of plights.

Understand that one of many are

you. Think maybe I

fail to plan my love for this life?

 

8-4-08

Reviews

[Brett Campaigne]

You've certainly honed this style down to a science, theres alot of reversals in the text that are really neat, though to perfect it would be to never say the same thing on both sides.