On A Falling day of  Rain

On A Falling day of Rain

A Poem by Violet Evergreen
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How beautiful the gentle breeze feels While I remember our plastic memory days ............

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she told me she loved rain
she loved the way
it felt when it touched her skin
she loved the way
it describes her feelings
she loved the way
everything turns blue
she loved the way
it made people remember rain
she wishes to become rain
before she's gone
just like rain
she does not last long
yet she told me she loved rain

© 2021 Violet Evergreen


Author's Note

Violet Evergreen
Dear .... thank u for reading this .... please correct me if I was wrong somewhere .... your opinion is my greatest joy
Have a nice day :)

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It indeed is delightful to experience. It brings out the best and the worst simultaneously; the best is the tea on the balcony, the smell of the land after the rain, and the worst being the sludge and the sadness it brings. It was an immense joy to read your poem; the words you chose were simple yet stunning.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It indeed is delightful to experience. It brings out the best and the worst simultaneously; the best is the tea on the balcony, the smell of the land after the rain, and the worst being the sludge and the sadness it brings. It was an immense joy to read your poem; the words you chose were simple yet stunning.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 6, 2021
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Tags: Remenesence of memory, love, unspoken charecter