"Tiny infinity" is a phrase I am jealous of. And not just because it is an oxymoron, but because of the sounds of the two words together. And they are onomatopoeic, too. And look at the rhythm of that last line, and the other sounds too. They all go together beautifully. And that's just the last line! Lovely little poem, Miss Minimalist...
Smiled at the gold within your eyes, guiding us all to the limitless treasure within. And you are a treasure; a vast wealth of passion and stirring desires in endless worlds of wonder. Please let it be... forever.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
im speechless right now
very poetic review by the way very touching
11 Years Ago
Ah, I would never wish you speechless. Your words are music.
"Tiny infinity" is a phrase I am jealous of. And not just because it is an oxymoron, but because of the sounds of the two words together. And they are onomatopoeic, too. And look at the rhythm of that last line, and the other sounds too. They all go together beautifully. And that's just the last line! Lovely little poem, Miss Minimalist...
This a brilliant poem full of classic lines. The last stanza is awesome. You're really a unique writer with a great imagination and presence as well as style in your writing. Bravo Samantha.
I love when you write poetry like this amazing poem. Allow the reader to fall into deep thoughts and wonder.
"Unfold these moon shy limbs
that chase silence
and beg "Stay with me"
Sometime we must become nude and open locked door to know the truth. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
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