Climatic

Red lust
dripping desire
But this ink is not a dick
and your hand is not a p***y
so come a little harder

Please hit me
with your hardest

Cause the angle of
my handiwork
the curve of my
curvature
got you spewing
to my climatic cue

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Beaner166]

Dam. As always great piece with amazing wording.

[B-poet]

What a way with words here. Very emphatic with a defining climax at the end. Except here you're playing the gatekeeper in regards to stamina at wits end of profound climax. Great job. :)

[KeeD]

The wait was worth having such a beautiful climax. Great job

[Aristede Craig Jr]

mmmmm

[writing mojo]

a heedful to your endearing fans in hope of the ever lasting climax after words [email protected] piece

[HeWhoJives]

You added something reminiscent of a def jam jive at the end there. I dig this

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

!!! HIT !!! Indeed!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. Direct and honest thoughts made the reader think. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[John Alexander McFadyen]

That moment of not being able to resist, of exploding in response to that most wonderful urge. Well described in few words.

[Kenneth The Poet]

The tangent to any curve of second degree is a line after all.