Ink-gasm

Ink-gasm

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet

Slowly
feeling
building
gushing
pressure
as my pen
explodes

in an ink-gasm
cause my poetry
cums all over the page



By Samantha Campbell Pruitt

© 2013 Samantha ~virginpoet


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. . . girl, you are beautiful. I love the formatting and concept of your poem. Just a pure simple turn on!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice use of words..!! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


I had to giggle as I read this one Samantha, but it was great from build-up to final line.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Amazing description gave life to the photo. You are a artist. You make your words come alive. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


The imagery that cums to mind is mind blowing! LOL

Posted 7 Years Ago


This conjures up a very clear mental image of a girl lying naked on her back, with a puddle of wet ink slowly drying on her body ... very nice. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


You've got the hottest ink, and most sensual of minds. May you have five, six... or is it seven ink-gasms a day please. Burns the pages.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really love the way you wrote this... Your so expressive when you write... Great job baby

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes please... welcome back

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good metaphor, i Ike how you executed it. Good flow and unique use of font size to emphasize a climax. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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