Throwing Stones

Throwing Stones

A Poem by D. R. Fitzgerald Jr

The pot begins to boil over

Flooding the clear vision of my heart

The glass shatters

From a stone hallucination

My fever towers, I lash out

Throwing the stone around

The stone of accusations

I dig myself a quarry

Stones lead to boulders

Boulders that break glass

That breaks glass already thought shattered

© 2008 D. R. Fitzgerald Jr


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Hinted with sadness, and a sense of realization of the end, this is a well penned domino. I have to agree with Adam though, it seems like you need another line right after I dig myself a quarry

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think this could be fleshed out some but I was still able to get a clear interpretation of it. It just seems like everything is cyclical and that Newton had it right: for every action there is an equal and opposite reaction. Great write and powerful imagery with the glass and boulders.

Go Ravens!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


It took me reading this several times before I understood that this was about jealousy and that your heart is the broken glass. This is actually one of your best poems. I really like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on February 12, 2008

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D. R. Fitzgerald Jr
D. R. Fitzgerald Jr

Lynchburg, VA



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I'm 25 years old and live in Lynchburg VA. I don't really think i'm a great writer or even a good one, writing is just my way of venting. Sept. 18 The Day Of Internal Mystery Those born on September .. more..

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