Pride

Pride

A Poem by Virtual Phun

There's nothing to say,
I got ghosts of words, I have loads of those,
There's nothing to bleed,
Another way to say what I have already preached,
I'm making mistakes, afraid of what I make,
The pain I make and the hurting I don't feel,
There's a need to bleed,
On pages
For you to see, 'cause that's when I truly feel real.

© 2016 Virtual Phun


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I do want to say that you are a Great poet !*

Keep on !

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amazing! I'd have to agree with William Liston, definitely need a name change...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Virtual Phun

7 Years Ago

I'm really glad you like it! Thank you for reviewing. :)
This is very well written. I think you should consider a name change.

-William Liston

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Virtual Phun

7 Years Ago

Thank you. That means a lot. :)

The name helps deflating my pride.

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Added on June 6, 2016
Last Updated on June 6, 2016
Tags: pride, dark, bleeding

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Virtual Phun
Virtual Phun

Omdurman, Sudan



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Corazøn en fuego. ı defınıtely łost my halø. I love writing cryptic poetry and song lyrics, most of them are of personal experiences, some of them are of matters a.. more..

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A Poem by Virtual Phun