Friendly Fire

Friendly Fire

A Poem by Vivek George Koshy

Disastrous.

A peep for the culprit,
still a lot to hide.
Search, forced to.
The yard is empty,
the liar clever.
Footsteps of the captain;
find him!
The duty of command,
propels.
He is never found;
he could never be.

He lives in me.

© 2011 Vivek George Koshy


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Hey it happens! It's not uncommon a life is like a fire, so you must be careful to not disturb it otherwise the fire grows only to destroy. It's hard for fire to do something good it's rare, but it happens! Nicely done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

brilliant ending. it was unexpected.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! I was wondering what he did but then I looked at the title...intense.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 23, 2010
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Vivek George Koshy
Vivek George Koshy

Kolkata, West Bengal, India



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