Keeping It Natural (part 1)

Keeping It Natural (part 1)

A Poem by Voncloud

some of us have had friends who copy lines out of other peoples' poems and take it for themselves, either for the fame or to impress a spouse; this poem revolves around that topic.


I've never believed keeping an anthology by Shakespeare as a way of expressing your inner-most feelings, but rather, an expression of how hard you're trying to hide them. People under-estimate doing it naturally; they under-estimate doing it themselves, but the truth of the matter is if you're not willing to look/sound stupid then you're not willing to fall in love.It doesn't take a deal with the confectioner to make her become more open; nor does it take an astrologer to know that you're a part of her, all it takes is heart. Willingness brews strong results.


Consider this, you're busy copying shakespeare's poems to impress her, and yes, she's definetly getting impressed. The bottom-line is she's falling in love with Shakespeare and not you; harsh, but true. Shakespeare is the wheel-wright and you're the third wheel. Worse off, what if she finds out? you would have done nothing but compile a recipe for disaster, the perfect coup de grace to a mans' ego...

© 2012 Voncloud

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Author's Note

i wrote this in early 2011...decided to share it...please notify me of all my mistakes while reviewing..

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Added on June 7, 2012
Last Updated on June 7, 2012
Tags: poems, writing, love



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