Too Much

Too Much

A Poem by Wafa
"

If you want to leave, leave gently

"
It was too much
And I was unhappy
I told you to stay
But you left me already
I was full of love
But you were full of lies
I told you I'm fine
But what if I'm not?
You can't just leave me
In my saddest nights
It was too much
To handle this pain
I'm not asking you
To come back to my darkness
But I'm asking you to go
In my better days

© 2019 Wafa


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oh wow...

the last two lines...asking you to leave in my better days.
right now i need you, tomorrow i will be okay and you can leave, because i know the "us" is a bust...
love and lies make strange bedfellows for sure.
really like where this ended up....good poem.
j.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wafa

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks you!!!
You're so sweet!



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This sounds sad and emotionally driven.
A broken trust that needs no more disturb.
Mind full of memories, heart lovingly hurt,
Trying to get back together and be free from love dungeon.

I felt emotionally impressed by your expression. You really penned this so well, Wafa.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Wafa

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for saying that ♥️!
oh wow...

the last two lines...asking you to leave in my better days.
right now i need you, tomorrow i will be okay and you can leave, because i know the "us" is a bust...
love and lies make strange bedfellows for sure.
really like where this ended up....good poem.
j.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wafa

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks you!!!
You're so sweet!
This one has the sound of desperation. The dread of abandonment can lead us to desire even the worst of relationships. Hopefully this will work out all right.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wafa

2 Weeks Ago

Hopefully.
Thank you.

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Added on August 5, 2019
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Tags: Want, leave, too much, darkness, love, unhappy, stay, lies, fine

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Wafa
Wafa

Saudi Arabia



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