Improper

Improper

A Poem by Wafa
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All you know is that you are just you

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You seem okay
but you're so confused
You feel lonely
In the crowded rooms
And everybody thinks
That you're a w***e
But you stay alone
Like the fifth wall in a room
Everybody knows that
You're worthless
And improper
Everybody sees you
Wants you more
And get blessed of touching you
But all you know that
You're sad and lonely too
But everybody sees you
Think that you're
Rich and happy too
But everybody thinks
That you're a w***e
And all you think
That you're sick of you

© 2019 Wafa


Author's Note

Wafa
Hopefully you will like it 💕.

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What people perceive and what people are can be very different. Here you capture well the low self-esteem that is generated by negative attitudes. But to what extent is it a matter of perception? Maybe people are not thinking so badly! Whatever, we need to stand tall and look straight ahead, ignoring the opinions of the worthless. Be the fifth wall!



Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Wafa

2 Weeks Ago

Yes!!
Thank you for your review 💕🙏🏻
i do like it, but the speaker needs to realize these people who are being so judgmental...aren't worth a salt.
i really like the idea of the "fifth wall in a room"---

no one is worthless except those who call others that.
j.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Wafa

3 Weeks Ago

Agree with you 💗
Thank you so much ♥️🙏🏻

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Added on August 19, 2019
Last Updated on August 19, 2019
Tags: Self, control, justice, lonely, rich, sad, love

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Wafa
Wafa

Saudi Arabia



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